Thesis: There are many psychological factors that play a part in personality development. If people can understand that, they will be more patient, and less arrogant towards each other.
Key Support:
1)Genetics may play a role in personality development, but a psychologist will tell you that the event that happen in your life, the people you surround yourself with, and your attitude towards life is the biggest factors for personality development.
2)People constantly ridicule others for things they do, but when it all comes down to it, the real reason is because they don't truly understand where the other person is coming from.
Saturday, April 18, 2009
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4 comments:
I think even if we understand where people are coming from we cannot "know" where they are coming from. This argument is flawed in that you have based your key assertion on the assumption that people's for most people knowing = a change in behavior.
I like the topic but what are you going to research (statistics)? I think you should make it more argumentative.. But i don't know how you would do that. I don't know how you are going to be able to show the understanding side and their personality and the arrogant side's personality.
I agree with Kaylas comment. How are you able to make it an argumentative essay? If it will just be based on statistics i don't know how you will persuave us with just list of numbers...
i think that this paper has a lot of facts but i don't feel like i'm trying to be persuaded to do something. also, people might ridicule others because of their own insecurity.
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