Thesis: Society’s violence reflects what is shown through media and parents should be aware of the potential violence that their children may face.
Key Support:
1) The average American child watches too much violence on TV and the shown violence could reflect on future violent behaviors.
2) The rise in violence in the society is because of the rise in media violence.
3) Parents should try to do more to monitor their children's television shows because it is the parents responsibility to protect their children or not.
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2 comments:
I would change the "should be aware" and make it more emphatic. Awareness is difficult to measure. Maybe we need to pass a law, or censor certain things...think about ways you can sound more controversial.
I could not agree with the second key support. Does media violence affect the violence in society as a whole?
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