Thesis: Our current economic situation is providing us the perfect time to purchase a home.
Key Support:
1) Property is the cheapest it has been in the last ten years.
2) Interest rates are down making it easier to afford a home.
3)Fist time buyers will get $8,000 tax credit.
4)There is a large inventory of property for sale.
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Your thesis is not phrased in a way that argues anything. You need suggest that your audience do something. Maybe you wish to argue that a if we wish to improve the economy, we need to all buy homes. This statement tells your audience to do something rather than just stating your view, as you have it now.
I agree and I think your essay would be really interesting if you were to prove that by buying houses we could fix the economy. But if you were to do this, the flaw is people right now don't have money to buy a house.
I agree with the first two comments, you should change your thesis a bit to make it sound like you are arguing something. The economy is at its down and it may be hard for people to buy houses because of the great unemployment rate. But those who have the money saved up should take a stand and buy a home before the prices rise.
Buying houses now maybe low because of the recession that we are in. But how are you going to make this as an argumentative? However, even though houses maybe low range of prices now, a lot of workers now does not have a job. So, they do not have enought money to purchase there own home.
I agree with your first statement. Prices have gone down in real estate within the last ten years. However, what the state/county considers "affordable housing" is not realistically affordable to a lot of people. Also,cost of living expenses have skyrocketed within the last few years causing most families to live paycheck to paycheck and barely making ends meet as it is.
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